My Channel-Help

[eMitox3]

Hello Everyone, I'm a Spanish boy and today I create a channel about pc games, I'm 15 years old and I don't know a lot of english and for this I make this channel, to improve my pronunciation. My channel is going to be about tutorials and gameplays and I ask you what things I can improve.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IdlyGgaB9RI&feature=plcp

Is good my pronunciation ?

[Afr0Blu3]

Kind of hard to give feedback when your link gives me a message saying the user closed their account